Sunday, September 8, 2013

Critter Volume 4 Chapter 8 PT.2 Series Finale.




The End




The Critter did its job, but it needed to be killed. Sandra demanded that it be put to sleep and then let go into space, so we did just that. Sandra took care of the sleeping part, and Mitchell took care of moving it to the garbage shoot, using his powers of course, no one would be able to lift that thing. During the fight, they saw Jessica and Dave escape on a pod; they knew this fight wasn’t for them. The group wondered why they left, where they would go. They seemed confident in their destination, which made everyone wonder if maybe there was a Lettium home base somewhere on Earth, or any other planet for that matter.

Sandra had proven herself to be trusted; the group had quickly grown a liking for her and her crazy scientist ways. She took the group to the hospital wing, where Chris was recovering in one of the rooms. Clearly, Lettium wasn’t finished with Chris yet, and they patched him up making sure that he stayed alive.  Mitchell sat beside his bed, as he lay asleep. Chris felt the warmth of Mitchell’s hand on his, he slid one eye open “did we win?” he whispered, clearly taking a lot out of him “yes Chris, yes we won” Mitchell smiled, happy to see that he had survived.

Mitchell rolled Chris out of his room in a wheel chair; there were nurses and doctors standing in the hallway pressed against the wall, they were all smiling ear to ear. Sandra came towards them with a big smile on her face “this way” whispered “why is everyone so happy?” he wondered as he joined his friends at the end of a long hallway. Rachel smiled as she stood along side Lena and Jordan. Ashley greeted Mitchell and held onto his hand “because you freed them” Sandra said as she pushed open two giant double doors. The group began walking out onto what looked like a balcony, they could see across the way were more balconies. This must be where the people on the ship live, they thought. When Mitchell, Ashley, Rachel, Jordan, and Chris walked out they were greeted by applause, hundreds of people stood below them and on balconies clapping for the group “you saved us from him, we owe you everything” Sandra explained as the clapping and cheering became louder “how do we know this is real?” Mitch asked “how do we know we’re not going to wake up again someday and end up somewhere else?” he asked again as his eyes widened by the amount of people “it’s real, trust me” Sandra said “as long as we stick together, it doesn’t matter, let’s make the most of it” Ashley said with a smile.

They had no idea what they would do, whether they would leave the ship or stay aboard. All they knew is they had to honor the ones that had died for this place did in the name of science. A day had passed since the battle took place, it was time to say goodbye to the ones they had lost and begin making plans for the future. Lettium had a priest on board who read a few passages from the bible, thought not everyone believed in a god, especially after what they had been through, it still brought some peace of mind, it felt as if it was a proper goodbye to the ones they loved.

Mitchell was wondering the halls doing what he loved doing most, thinking. The people on this ship, the people that Lettium, that Curtis left behind needed a leader, someone to guide them in the right path. He was interrupted by Ashley standing in front of him “it’s gone” she said with a worried look “the book, that had all of our information, about our real pasts. It’s gone” she said “I thought we burnt it” Mitchell added “someone took what was left, maybe it’s a good thing” Ashley wondered aloud “maybe all we need is right here in front of us” she said as she went in for a long passionate kiss. It was that moment, that the ship began feeling like it could be home.

8 months later

Mitchell shot out of bed when he heard his pager going off, it was only ever used for emergencies, this must have been important. He turned over to Ashley, as she lay sound asleep beside him. Strawberry pop tart crumbs were covering the coffee table next to her, the lamp was left on from when she fell asleep reading ‘This New Place’ was the name of the book, seemed fitting. Mitchell leaned over and kissed her belly, he rubbed it for a moment and smiled while he sat excited to become a father, only a month away now. Their son would be named, Warren, in honor of the bravest man Mitchell had ever met.

He got dressed quickly, throwing on part of the outfit he wore yesterday mixed with clean underwear and socks. He ran down the hallway “sir” someone said as he passed by “sir” someone said again, Mitchell did all he could to wave at the men but he was clearly in a rush. “WHAT IS IT?” Mitchell yelled as he burst into the captains cockpit of the ship “Captain” yelled one of the pilots “it’s about the escape pods, we found one” the man said “is it his?” Mitchell asked in excitement “we have video confirmation” he said turning a monitor to face him “shall we send someone in?” the man asked. Mitchell refrained from answering as he gazed into the screen at a photo of Clayton, Kelly and Jason on earth, very much alive “no, don’t send anyone” he said “I’ll go” he replied as he ran to suit up “OH AND CALL RACH, SHE’S GUNNA WANNA COME ON THIS ONE” he yelled remembering how much she missed her best friend Clayton.

Jordan sat up all night writing, he took to it when he realized all that his friends and himself had been through would probably make a good story, of course any right mind reading it would probably think it’s complete fiction. The sun had risen, and Jordan was beginning to feel very tired and somewhat weak, he noticed Lena had been in the bathroom getting ready for quite sometime when the baby started crying “hush now Athena” Jordan whispered while holding his daughter. Yes, we all knew the baby wasn’t actually his son, but since Warren’s passing, Jordan and Lena had become closer then ever. Lena treated Athena as their baby, not just hers. After all, Jordan was a big scary vampire; Lena knew he could protect them. The only thing is that when Lena was sleeping all night that’s when Jordan would be awake, and during the day when Jordan slept, Lena was awake taking care of the baby. It all kind of worked out though, thank god for space…. there really isn’t any concept of day and night and the sun is never powerful enough nor is it ever close by to effect Jordan, in a way this was the perfect place for him to live. Jordan only slept when he was tired; it made it easier for him to father Athena.

At one point, Sandra thought she might have come up with a cure for Jordan, a serum that would reverse his condition. He would no longer be a vampire, but Lena didn’t want this for him, she wanted him to stay Vampire at least this way she knew she and her daughter would be safe. A phone rang, it was the kind a phone attached to the wall under a sheet of glass and it was only ever used for emergencies. Lena always thought it was funny that even in such a futuristic place, they still had a phone on a cord. “Hello?” Jordan said weary of the answer “Jordan, it’s Mitch” he said “and?” Jordan expected more “we found them” that was all he needed to say “on my way” Jordan slammed the phone on the hook and began dressing. “Babe?” Lena asked curious of the importance of the phone call “Lena, it’s them for real this time” Jordan noticed a rather large grin painted all over Lena’s face “you going to get them?” she asked while she was changing Athena on top of their king size bed. “We’re gunna bring them home” Jordan passed by Lena and ran his cold hand across her face.

Rachel was beyond excited to get Clayton back; it had been months since they had departed from the ship and ever since they had been searching for the pod. She had assumed that they left because they thought everyone was dead, all they would have heard were gun shots so it would be a hard decision to make but Rachel knew Clayton did it to protect Kelly and Jason. There simply wasn’t a threat anymore although if they had survived this long on Earth than maybe they found a safe haven somewhere. Rachel knew when she got down there, the chances of them coming back to the ship were slim, she hoped everyone remembered that Kelly was a mermaid, she needed water and that was something that outer space simply couldn’t offer.

The ship being used for the travel was a detachable mini ship on the bottom of the big ship; it was made specifically for small trips like this one. The ship held about 30 people and has the ability to get them there quickly and safely. Mitchell had organized the group that would be attending the search and rescue mission, that’s what they were calling it although most of them knew that it probably wasn’t a rescue, they seemed safe wherever they were. Tagging along with Mitchell on the mission would be Chris, Rachel, Jordan and Sandra. A tall man by the name of Dex decided he would lend a helping hand. They had no idea what to expect upon landing, but they figured they would simply land the ship apart from the site where their friends were spotted, just to give them room to breath incase there was a threat they needed to recognize. It would be a 2.5-day trip through the dark and dangerous emptiness that is space “what are we waiting for?” yelled Rachel, who was excited to see her best friend again.

Ashley stood at a large open window along side Lena. Ashley kept one hand on her belly as she worried for her man. Lena held some comfort in knowing that her man would heal if he was hurt, but if he came in contact with the sun, it could be fatal. They both anxiously waited for their return and hoped for a full house.

DAY 1

“So what did you do when Lettium ran the show?” asked Mitchell to Dex “I was a technician, actually I was in the room when ya’ll were attacked by Lettium soldiers” he explained “I was always part of the resistance” the man sat with a thick southern accent “we tried to stop Lettium, but we underestimated them” he added “well, thanks for coming with us” asked Mitchell “I would do anything for you, you gave me my freedom” he said with a stone cold look on his face “I should be forever thanking you”.

Mitchell still wasn’t used to it, the fact that he ran the show around here now. These people looked up to him and his friends so immensely that it almost scared him; he was scared of letting them down. He often thought that if he couldn’t keep Ashley safe while he was in Bon Temps, how could he keep hundreds of people safe, especially in Space….a place he ironically spent over 50 years in but knew nothing about. Often times he would wake up in the night in a sweat, he always told Ashley it was a side effect caused by what Lettium did to them, but the truth was that he was still having detailed dreams, just like he had in Bon Temps. The dreams always meant something, it was the universes way of warning him. Some days the dreams would be so simple and mean essentially nothing but other days it was the opposite.

Rachel laid on a bed while she was wrapping her tight blonde curls around her index finger, she often did it when she was bored, it was habit. She was bored, and this ship was fairly big so she decided to go for a walk. She came across a locked room and remembered they were all given a master key when they came aboard, in case any of them became separated on earth and had to make their way back to the ship alone, they could get inside any room with this key. Rachel entered the room and to her surprise it was a master bedroom. King size pillow top mattress on a dark stained wooden bed frame, a calming photograph of a sailboat hung on the wall along with a tall body size mirror. A night table sat beside the bed with a lamp and book, the book had a bookmark inside it was then she noticed the luggage sitting neatly beside the table.

It was too late; whoever was staying in this room would know she had been there because she wasted no time and immediately jumped onto the bed causing the breathtakingly beautiful tucked in sheets to become a mess. Rachel had been assigned a cot, along with the rest of her crew so she wondered who was staying here. “Rachel?” Chris asked as he came out from the bathroom with no shirt on “of, Chris are you staying here?” she asked “I’m sorry, I really had no idea. How come you get the master bedroom? Huh?” she said sarcastically “the doc suggested I sleep in here so that I can take care of myself” he said “I’m still healing ya know” Rachel was instantly reminded of the painful memory of Chris taking a bullet for them during the battle against Curtis “Oh ya” Rachel said embarrassed “I’ll leave you alone then” she said as she began to walk out “or you could stay and keep me company, we have a long trip ahead” he said as he pulled a large bottle of red wine from his bag “deal” Rachel said as she plopped back onto the bed.

The bottle was just about empty and Chris was still shirtless “do you mind?” she asked as she nodded toward the bandage covering Chris’s gun shot wound “not at all” he said as he placed his hand on hers and guided it up his chest to the bandage, he used his other hand to take off the bandage and Rachel felt the scar “does it hurt?” “Sometimes” he whispered “I wish I could use my powers on other people; I could make you feel better” she glared into his gorgeous brown eyes “ who sais you’re not making me feel better” and it was then that they began kissing. Clothes came off not long after and suddenly they became very thankful of each other, in a world where so many of their friends had died, it was nice to just simply be.

DAY 2

Mitchell had managed to drift off to sleep, even through the noise of his friends loudly playing a card game. When he fell deeply he knew he would dream, this time was different though, his dream was really trying to tell him something. He could see images of the ship exploding and crashing. People were dying and there was no saving them and suddenly he was holding Ashley in his arms, she was dead. This was enough to send him sending to consciousness; Mitch threw himself from his cot and fell to the floor panting and dripping sweat. “It’s the ship, it’s going to explode” he yelled. Rachel ran to his side helping him off the floor “what do you mean?” she yelled back “I don’t know yet” he whispered “we need to get everyone off that ship.”

“WE’RE ALMOST THERE!” yelled Sandra “I can see where we have to land, they had already broken through the atmosphere and could see land, they were fast approaching “HOLD ON TO YOUR HATS!” yelled Mitch as he desperately tried landing the ship. They hovered over tall trees until they found a small clearing where they could land safely, and they did.

No one knew what to expect from Earth, the entire reason Lettium left was to escape the creatures that took over, so it was natural to be feeling nervous. Mitchell had his abilities, which at this point no one really knew what he was capable of. He started out just reading minds, and now he can send energy from his hands. Rachel could heal, which was good for her but what about the rest of them? Jordan could take care of himself, which we have recently found out and as far as we know Chris was human, and ever since the book (which revealed everyone’s true abilities) went missing, we really don’t know for sure. One thing we did know for sure was that Sandra and Dex were definitely human, so naturally they carried heavy weaponry.

Something whipped through the air; it was so fast that they barely noticed it until Sandra hit the ground. Dex looked down to see a dart sticking from her neck; it had put her to sleep. “RUN” yelled Dex after he made sure Sandra had a pulse, and then he hit the ground not three steps away from her. Mitchell was prepared to use his powers but it was hard when he had no idea where it was coming from. Rachel hit the ground. Shortly after her Chris went down. Jordan and Mitchell looked at each other, they gave up. Even if they were to escape, how could they leave their friends behind? Jordan went down, and then Mitchell.

When they awoke the next day the first thing they noticed was that Jordan was missing “HEY, HEY!” yelled Mitch from a deep pit dug in the ground. He yanked at the chains that were wrapped around his legs. Rachel, Sandra, Dex and Chris were in the hole with him. A small boy poked his head out from above, he seemed curious. He couldn’t have been any older then 6. “Hey you!” yelled Mitch as he glared through the sun to see the boy “do you know where our friend is?” he asked, “vampire go away so he won’t burn” the boy said. Mitchell took these words and thought to himself If these people meant us any harm, they would have let Jordan die and instead they saved him. “Can you send someone?” asked Mitch, and that was enough to send the boy running off. He hoped the boy would return with answers and soon enough, Mitchell got all the answers he needed. “You always seem to find yourselves In some sort of trouble” said a woman from above, and when Mitch looked up he could see Kelly. A face that warmed him to his very core “KELLY?” you could tell he was happy to see her “here” she said as she kicked down a rope.

Kelly grabbed Mitchell’s hand pulling him from the hole. They embraced with a smile on their faces and tears of excitement falling from their cheeks. Rachel and the rest of them shortly joined, Clayton and Jason were nowhere to be found. Kelly explained as much as she could as she led them through a small cave, which was hidden, by a thin waterfall. As they passed through they saw the first piece of beauty since waking up after hyper sleep. It was a large farmhouse that seemed like it kept going for miles. Wherever this place was, they had clearly found paradise. A large silver wire fence surrounded the property “it’s to keep them away” Kelly explained as she saw the group looking at the prison looking fence.

Among the houses there was also a large body of water that began in the middle of the property similar to a watering hole and wrapped around behind the houses revealing even more. Fully grown trees whispered in the wind and the sounds of chickens, cows and horses near by filled the air. This place was perfect. Clayton and Jason came running from a large shed in the distance, they had big smiles on their faces, and those smiles never faded.

It was a group of approximately 150 people, all living in this sanctuary of beauty, surrounded by mountains and trees and blessed with a lake of fresh water which made it possible for them to grow their own gardens, and there were several large patches of fresh fruit and veggies, something that they hadn’t had in space.

Eventually, a chat had to happen. Rachel, Mitchell and Jordan sat in a small cabin in which Clayton and Jason lived, Kelly joined them. “We thought you were dead, you know that right? We never would have left” explained Clayton “you don’t need to explain anything, you have a family to take care of. You did the right thing” explained Mitch “is it safe here?” Mitch asked “The creatures don’t live very well on earth, turns out they can’t really handle our eco system” explained Jason “there are still some out there, but not many” they explained “This group took us in once we landed and we have lived here since, in peace….finally” Clayton whispered “you could join us, we could live here and thrive together, we could take back this planet” he added. “There are hundreds of people on Lettium, I need to know that they will have a place too” Mitch added, “we will take in all that we can, this place can handle more than you think” Kelly explained “this can be home, we can finally say we survived it all”.


The group had arrived back to the ship; their plan was to discuss the possibility of a new and safer home for the people of Lettium. Clayton, Kelly and Jason stayed back on earth after they refused to travel back to space. Mitchell and the others liked the idea, but it wasn’t as simple as packing up and leaving, they would have to bring the ship and all it’s inhabitants along. Hours of talk had passed by and they reached a verdict, Lena and Ashley were very excited about their decision. They had decided that getting back to earth would be best for everyone. Lena loved the idea of Athena being able to grow up on earth and have somewhat of a normal life down there.

Mitchell was sweating as he tightened his knot on his thin green tie, Ashley walked up from behind him and wrapped her arms around him “this is for the best, they trust you” she whispered as she kissed him on the neck. The two of them shared a passionate lip lock “it’s time” she said as he went in for another kiss. He then smiled and turned away and walked down a hallway, the sounds of cheering and chanting became louder and more prominent. He then swung open a big door and became present standing in front of the hundred of people who lived on Lettium. He stepped up to the mic, he would be telling them of the news. That they will finally be free of Lettium and that they would have the power to control their own destinies. These people survived a terrible tragedy, we all did. That’s precisely why Mitch wanted to be rid of Lettium for good and going back to earth was the only logical way to do that.

1 year later.


It was a blissful day in the Haven, this is what people had begun calling the place they lived in. It had been a year since Lettium had landed on earth and not a single person had died, this was something the people missed about life, they forgot what it was like not to live in fear.

Wedding bells were ringing in the air, today is the day of Mitchell and Ashley’s wedding. The very first wedding to take place in The Haven. Their new baby boy, Warren, would be right there with them, it was a celebration everyone was looking forward too. After everything they have been through it felt like they could finally take time to focus on their relationship.

Mitch and Ashley loved each other so much, and it seemed like it was a tad contagious. Lena and Jordan were happily together as were Clayton and Jason. Rachel and Chris had become very close, some would say a relationship had bloomed between them and honestly everyone saw it coming.   

At this point The Haven had become a fully functioning village. With a population of almost 400 people who work hard each and every day to survive. The threat of the Critter’s was still out there but they were a lot less common now a day.

Jordan walked alone through the beautifully decorated outdoor wedding. He had something in his hands as he approached the gift table; he then placed a book on the table. He had a smile on his face as he thought of how much Mitchell and Ashley are going to love this gift; it was the story he had been writing since they returned from Bon Temps. Jordan always called it ‘A story of Love and Courage’ and he hoped that one day Athena and baby Warren could read it and understand the truth about the world they live in and how their parents survived and started a new life for them. Athena and baby Warren could also be supernatural; this story would help them understand how special they are. It was probably midnight at this point and Jordan’s day was just starting. The wedding was set up and it was scheduled for about 9pm the next day. This might seem late for a wedding but when a vampire is in the wedding party you’ve got to accommodate. He was on his way towards the lake to begin gathering water for the wedding when he felt a prick on his neck. Almost like a mosquito bite but softer. He pulled something from his neck, it was a silver dart. His vision instantly became blurry and he became unconscious within seconds and hit the floor. A shadowy figure stood over his body as his eyes closed.

At this point it was around 10AM, no one had begun the lengthy process of getting prepared for the wedding, and the group decided to get together for a toast to start the day with good vibes and surrounded by the ones they know and love. They all agreed to meet in the Lettium ship, which was landed, and resting a few miles out in the mountains. When they arrived, they were all taken back by the sight of the ship, it looked brand new, like someone had polished it and fixed it up “did you do this?” Mitch asked Sandra “I wanted it to be special for your big day” Sandra explained. Mitchell thought it was an odd thing to do but he knew she thought she was doing a sweet thing, like the ship was special to him or something, which it wasn’t.

They walked aboard and the lights inside were on, they turned a corner and there was a giant ‘Congratulations’ sign posted on the wall. Mitchell and Ashley smiled as Sandra pulled out a bottle of champagne “where did you get that?” Asked Ashley as she smiled “I found it aboard while we were cleaning, I thought it was an appropriate occasion” she said as she popped the bottle and began pouring them into glasses “I’d like to say a toast” Sandra said as she pored the last glass. “Cheers to the happy couple, you two have honestly shown me what’s important in life” she said and the group all took a big gulp. Lena, Ashley, Chris, Mitchell, Clayton, Jason, Kelly, Rachel, Dex, and Sandra were all enjoying the taste of Champagne; one of the many fruits of life they had to sacrifice after the event took place.

Mitchell then realized that Sandra and Dex hadn’t drank their glass yet “you know it’s bad luck not to drink after a toast” he said as Sandra looked over at him and dropped it on the floor “I don’t think luck has anything to do with this” a cold voice said from across the room. Jessica and Dave walked into the room dressed as if they were going to a business meeting “what the fff-“ Mitchell tried to yell at the sight of the only two remaining Lettium employees, but he couldn’t get it out. There was definitely something in the champagne. Mitchell began getting dizzy. Ashley grabbed his hand and fell to her knees and the rest of the group followed suit. 

Dave walked in between the beds; the silver chrome beds each had someone lying on top of them. “Their ready” Dex yelled as he just finished hooking up Lena’s last wire to her wrist. Jordan had joined the group and Sandra and Jess were holding Athena and baby Warren. The group was unconscious and all hooked up to the same machines that sent them to Bon Temps in the first place. “We can final finish Lettium’s work” said Jess as she rocked Athena back and forth in her arms “Curtis would be proud” said Sandra as she gazed over the people she tricked into trusting her for the past year and a half. Using his large muscular arms, Dex pulled a big lever that started up all the machines. “Time to go back” Dave said as he typed a few fancy numbers into a keypad “Dex, wipe their memories and implant the new ones” he shouted. Dex grinned and began walking past each of the beds and pressing a red button on each of their monitors. “Sandra, I’m impressed. You made them trust you and the whole time they had no idea” said Dave “time to go” he added. Just then Athena began crying, “hush now baby girl” whispered Jess as she walked off with Lena’s baby. “Do it” Dave whispered to Dex who ran to the opening of the ship and fired off a flare gun in the air.

This was the signal to alert others in The Haven who was working with Jess, Dave, Sandra and Dex to take over the little village. Just then, several men took out guns and pointed it at the people, they would do the same thing Curtis did when he was In power, ask people for their loyalty and in return they would provide safety. Just like that, The Haven was no longer a safe place.

Sandra sat with Dave and Jess “It’s ready, we can send them back and I can continue to conduct my research” Sandra murmured “and they won’t remember a thing right?” asked Jess “they won’t remember a thing, as far as their concerned it’s just Bon Temps all over again” she added “what do we do about the kids?” asked Dave “we raise them, they could be supernatural” Jess said “I always wanted kids” She said “Will it be different for them?” asked Jess “some parts may remain the same, but things will change a bit, not everyone that was here the first time is here this time” she explained “it’s up to their minds to create themselves, but we can guide them down the right path, or the wrong one”.

…………Lena was finishing up her shift at Mitch’s Bar and Grill, her belt pocket wasn’t as full of tips as she would have liked but she knew she couldn’t complain because she knew no one would listen. She served a plate of fries with a side of gravy to one of her regulars, Kindred, a sweet old lady that always minded her own business. She then walked into the backroom to sneak in a cigarette before she closed up and shooed away her last remaining customers. She heard rustling coming from her boss’s office and out came Dayna, a waitress that annoyed her more then anything. Her attitude sucked and Lena knew she was sleeping with Mitch to clear any bar tabs she might have.

“Excuse me” Dayna pushed past Lena and Mitchell zipped up his fly, he could see Lena staring into the office “can I help you darling?” Mitch asked “no” Lena said as she darted outside. Mitch straightened up a few stacks of loose papers in his office when he gazed up at a picture on the wall, it was opening day of the bar and members of the town came to celebrate. He walked towards the picture and removed it from the wall recovering a vault built behind the picture. He opened the vault and pulled out a large glass ball “what is that?” asked a man standing in his doorway “nothing” Mitch said as he scrambled to put away his safe. “What can I do for you Jason?” he asked the town sheriff “there’s a man here, he’s wondering if he could put up posters. He’s trying to find his missing sister and I told him I’d get you to talk to him” he explained “alright then” Mitch zoomed past him and was interrupted by a man at the back door “I got your shipment here, want me to unload it into the cooler?” “Ya that’s great Kyle, thanks!” Mitch yelled at his meat deliveryman.

“Have you seen my sister, Kelly?” the tall blonde man at the bar asked “No unfortunately I haven’t” Lena then walked back into the room to check on Kindred “Lena, you seen this girl before?” Lena took a long gaze at the photo “oh, ya that’s Kelly, I know her.” She explained, “do you know where I can find her?” the man asked “I’m sorry who are you?” she demanded an answer before she gave out anymore information “my name’s Clayton, this is my sister” he explained “my shift is over in a few minutes, I’ll take you there” Lena nodded and took the empty plate fro Kindred’s table “I’ll drive, you can tell you’re cab to go home” she said.  Mitch ran out and shoved his head into the window “Warren, buddy you can take off, here’s 40 keep the change” he said “alright, I’m sure I’ll see ya soon” he said as he drove off.

Lena and Clayton had been driving in silence for about 5 minutes “so where are you taking me?” Clayton asked “I know where she was staying, a motel up the highway” she explained. The motel was dirty and smelly and when they walked into the lobby the clerk at the desk was asleep on the desk. Lena woke him up and read his nametag “Chris” she read it aloud “is there a…” she waited for Clayton to fill in the blanks “Kelly Groulx staying here” he asked “room 5” he said as he went back to his nap.

They knocked on the door and got no answer, Clayton was too anxious so he busted open the door. There was a blonde woman passed out on the floor, Clayton turned her over to see that it wasn’t Kelly “this is Ashley Lundy, she’s a nurse here” “is she breathing?” Clayton asked “barely, we need to get her to a hospital” Lena and Clayton carried her to the car. They arrived at the hospital and was greeted by paramedics who took Ashley upstairs. “I bet she knows something” whispered Clayton “So I guess you’ll be sticking around for a while?” asked Lena “I have to” he replied “well, I have a spare bedroom at my place” she offered “Me and my brother, Jordan, used to live there together until he enlisted” she slightly frowned in the hopes that her brother is safe.

They arrived at Lena’s house, the front door was cracked open a tad, something wasn’t right. They kicked it open to see a woman standing with her back facing them in the living room “hello?” Lena asked. The woman turned around to reveal a large chunk of her cheek hanging from her face “Natasha?” Lena clearly knew the woman from the bar “help me” Natasha whispered as she lunged at Lena and Clayton. Clayton stumbled back and fell off the porch and Lena began running down her driveway screaming, they then heard a loud gun shot. A woman in a leather jacket standing next to a parked motorcycle took a shot at Natasha’s leg. She then hit the floor “there’s something inside me” she yelled as her bones began cracking, just then a slimy creature burst from her upper chest “CRITTER’S!” the woman in leather yelled as she shot it splattering blood all over Lena’s white bar t shirt. “Who are you?” asked Lena “I just saved your life” she shouted as she put her hand out “I’m Rachel, nice to meet you” she said. Clayton joined Rachel and Lena and the three of them stood over the creatures dead body “you called it a Critter?” asked Lena “that’s right…………a critter”.


Epilogue

Athena was excited to be celebrating her 16th birthday, her mom Jess was always so obsessed with making sure her birthday was always special. She hoped her mom would take her aboard Lettium, a mysterious ship that was located a few miles away from where she lived. Her mom always told her that she was forbidden to go there, that it was dangerous, but she had seen others there before.

Athena’s mom was with her aunt Sandra preparing for the party and Dex was hunting for diner. Athena thought to herself that she was too old to be treated like a child, and she wanted to prove to her mom that she was strong and fierce, so she would take Warren and go to Lettium to finally see what all the fuss was about.

When they reached the ship, there were two armed guards that they had to sneak by In order to crawl through an airway that was big enough to allow Athena and Warren to get in. “I’m scared” said Warren “don’t be scared, I’m excited” she would never admit that she was also a little scared.

The first room they ended up in was full of junk, boxes upon boxes of old stuff she had never seen before. It was as if they were using the ship for storage. They began rummaging through some of the stuff when Athena found a book that was wrapped in paper and tied up firmly in a bow “look at this” she whispered as she opened up the book. The title was called ‘Critter’ by Jordan Brisseau. She was intrigued by this hand written book and she had to begin reading right away, she first looked at the back of the book and carved into the bind of the book was written ‘For Mitch and Ashley on their big day, and their beautiful son Warren’.

She would have normally taken time to freak out over something like this but she was distracted by a scream “ATHENA COME QUICK!” Warren yelled from the next room. She ran into the room and was frightened by what she saw, there were people. They were breathing, hooked up to machines “I don’t understand” said Warren “who are these people?” he asked again. Athena said nothing as she walked up and down the beds, she looked up to read the monitors “Clayton” she whispered “Kelly” she said again “Jordan” she then remembered the book she found was written by a Jordan “Lena” she felt a strong fascination with her, she couldn’t explained it. Then she saw them, the people mentioned on the back of the book “Ashley and Mitchell” she whispered, “Warren, I think these people are your parents”. Warren stood beside them and you could tell by his face that he was very confused. Athena began walking toward the back of the room, there was a big lever that was pulled up “hey Warren, what do you say?” she asked and Warren gave a slight nod. Athena pulled the lever down and the room became still, the sleeping men and women began gasping for air.

Thursday, September 5, 2013

Critter Volume 4 Chapter 8 SERIES FINALE Part 1 : Survival



 Survival Part 1


It was clearly evident that we all still held possession of our powers, the very things that made us so special to Lettium in the first place. They were powerful, however that’s what this room was designed for; keeping whatever is locked away inside at all costs. 

The pain that they all felt from the loss of their friends was something that could be compared to hell. The group sat around the room clutching at the glass walls, Mitch closed his eyes “what are you doing?” asked Lena “I’m getting us out of here” he exhaled. For the first time since hyper sleep, Mitch was going to try and use his abilities, from what he knew from his life in Bon Temps they were extremely powerful and not even the great Man In The Suit could compete.

The lights then shut off, it was sudden and unexplainable. The group thought Mitchell had something to do with it, but in fact he had done nothing. “What’s happening?” Mitch said as the door slid open sounding like someone was cracking a Cola on a hot day. Ashley poked her head out into the hallway “it’s clear” she told the group.

The fact that the power just all of a sudden failed at that very moment seamed too suspicious, but they weren’t going to waste time asking questions, they took the opportunity for what it was, chance. The hallway was dark, but just lit enough from the back up generator. A soldier then opened the door to investigate; this is when Jordan took the opportunity to feed. The hunger Jordan was feeling is compared to when you would forget to eat during the day, and then without notice you are plagued with such an intense feeling of hunger that you feel like you could pass out, well that’s how he explained it. When he realized he was still a vampire, this is when the hunger came, it was like his body was reminding him that he needed to feed, or he might have fed on someone or something he would regret.

Jordan was griping tightly on Lena’s hand, leading the way as if he were suddenly protective of her. Let’s not forget that in Bon Temps, Jordan and Lena were once a couple, the feelings for her came rushing back when Warren died, not in a spiteful way but more in a “she needs me” kind of way. His love for her was once strong enough for him to ultimately give up his life for power (Dave taking his human life and replacing it with a vampire life) so that he could fight for Lena’s hand in the way he thought she would want. This was his second chance; he thanks Warren for this in some way. Jordan would never be able to conceive a child with Lena due to the fact that he was a blood-sucking vampire; Warren was the one who truly gave him the chance to have a child. This is assuming of course that the baby is even Warren’s, he was the father in Bon Temps but now, nothing was certain.






3 more soldiers had joined the group in the hallway only to be killed by Rachel and her trusty pistol, which she picked up from the previous (drained) soldier who Jordan had for lunch. Rachel peeked through a small glass window of a big door, they could hear movement inside and Rachel confirmed that there were people inside, a few scientists. “We need answers” she said as she kicked the door open. Holding the man and woman at gunpoint seemed to work, their hands were in the air and they looked truly terrified “Ashley?” the woman said as she looked into her eyes as if they were once friends “do I know you?” Ashley politely asked. The woman then pointed over at the wall where there were several pictures hanging. Amongst the photos was Ashley. She slowly walked toward the wall “what is this? Did I work for you people?” she asked, “yes” the woman said “You worked with us, we had no idea what this place was when they recruited us. Once they figured out what you were they took you” the woman added, “I’m Sandra, this is Sawyer”. “Well, what am I?” Ashley asked “It’s not what you are, it’s where you came from” replied Sandra “here, take this” she said as she handed over the book they had been carrying around, apparently it had been turned over to Sandra and Sawyer when the group was captured “all the answers of who you truly are lye in this book”.

Ashley gripped onto the book, she turned to her friends “I say we burn it” she said. This surprised the group, they figured Ashley would want to know what she was, not only that, the book held information on all of them “this book and whatever’s in it won’t change the fact hat we’re a family” she shouted while she tossed it onto the floor “I’m assuming this is flammable” she said as she grabbed a test tube of whiskey colored fluid from the desk and poured it on the book. “Do it” said Mitch. Ashley did just that, she dropped a matchstick on the book, igniting it in flames.

Sandra and Sawyer had convinced the group that there is some sort of rebel group that work on Lettium, but secretly work against them. Curtis holds great power over the people on the ship; they want something that he can provide for them, protection. When the creatures took over earth, Curtis disappeared to space. The threat on earth causes them to search out powerful weapons, people with super human abilities. Curtis wanted to study the powers, multiply them and eventually mass-produce them. He would have the one thing everybody wanted, which would make him the most powerful man on earth. “You promise people safety and power, they will do anything” said Sandra.

Just as if he was cued, Curtis came bursting through the door. He scanned the room to assess the situation and it was almost as if he took a moment to decide whether or not he could win this fight “I’m beginning to get so sick of you all” he murmured “likewise” Kyle yelled back at him. Kyle closed his eyes; the group knew what he was trying to do. You knew he was about to shift when his facial expression looked as if he was being shocked by an electric fence. The group had scene snakes, birds and even a cougar, what’s next? Everyone wondered. Kyle shifted much faster this time; in an instant he had morphed into a large hoofed animal “a reindeer?” the scientist, Sandra whispered from across the room. Kyle then charged at Curtis and his group of randoms that were blocking the doorway.

Mitchell knew Kyle had bought them some time, so he flipped the large steel table onto it’s side and ducked behind it with his friends. Sandra was tucked away in the corner with her arms wrapped around her knees. Sawyer however was making the group nervous “how do we get out of here?” yelled Mitchell. This was the moment he knew Sawyer was not planning on helping the group, he was clearly not part of the “rebel group” Sandra was talking about, or maybe he was just trying to impress Curtis and get into his good books. Either way, he had no idea who he was messing with. Mitchell pressed his back firmly against the table and motioned his hands in the direction of Sawyer who was crawling toward them with a gun in hand “I don’t think so” Mitchell’s voice tensed with the use of his power’s, the first time he’d used them since he had awoken. He had to admit, he was glad to have them once again.

“LADY, YOU HAVE TO HELP US” yelled Lena who was in a tight handgrip with her friend Ashley. They were desperately trying to find a way out and they knew Sandra had to know of an exit. Mitchell and Jordan had joined the fight; several armed guards accompanied Curtis for his ‘hide and seek’ moment when he came across the group. Lena heard a loud cracking noise, she peeked her head over the table to see Jordan leaping from person to person-snapping necks and taking names. It excited Lena to know Jordan could protect her like that, it gave her hope.






Rachel stood from behind the table and she instantly took bullet in the stomach, yes it hurt but when you’re so used to feeling pain like that after a while you become numb to it. She let out a gasp and then held firmly with both hands onto her wound. Her hair draped over her face as she made crying noises, the guard thought he had won. Rachel then lifted her hand “I’ve seen worse” she threatened. Her body spitting out the bullet and healing through the bloody hole that the shot left in her shirt distracted the guard. Rachel took this opportunity to toss a test tube full of greenish yellow liquid at the mans face. She had no idea what it was or what it would do to him, but she took a chance that it might be poisonous or acidic. When his eyes started pouring out white bubbles she assumed she guessed right.

“THIS WAY” Sandra finally stopped panicking and jumped from her cozy corner. She ran to the other end of the room and pushed through several tall carts smothered in test tubes. Behind them was a door “COME ON!” the crazy woman yelled. They had no reason to trust Sandra, but at least she didn’t try to kill them. Ashley looked Lena in the eyes “ready?” she whispered “I gotchya, don’t worry” she added. The two girls did a mental countdown in there heads and then they ran to the exit. The girls reached the other side as they turned to their friends; Rachel had run and joined their side. “BOYS THIS WAY” Ashley yelled. Jordan looked up, blood pouring from his mouth he spits out an ear, a human ear. Mitchell and Jordan caught up with the group “wait, I need to get Kyle” Mitch said turning back around and courteously stepping over the dead guards.


Mitch peeked his head out of the door to see that Curtis had gone, but he left Kyle behind. He was naked, lying in a pool of his own blood. Mitch ran to him “Kyle” he whispered, “What did he do to you?” Mitchell asked awaiting a response, but it was too late. Kyle was dead; the blood was coming from a hole in his chest and another on his lower back. “I’m so sorry” whispered Mitchell as he leant down to kiss him on the forehead. They had lost another, someone they all loved very much. Mitchell knew this wouldn’t be easy to break to the group. He slowly stumbled back into the room where his friends were awaiting his return. Mitch kept wondering why Curtis had left; maybe he went to get back up, this thought calmed Mitchell because maybe he knew he couldn’t win. Mitchell told the group about their fallen comrade, the group wept for Kyle, he was always such a happy man, someone that was often taken advantage of because of it but he had a big heart and he would be remembered as a hero.

Curtis had left them, but they knew he would return so they wasted no time. Sandra swore she had a way off the ship and demanded that they follow her. She led them to a big door that had a number code keeping it locked. Sandra typed in the password and took the group inside. A giant tank was in the center of the room, and inside the tank there was a Critter being preserved. This one was like nothing they had ever seen before, it had to be triple the size of what they were used too. The creature was floating peacefully in the tank while it was hooked up to several cords, much like the ones Lettium had on them “do you think it’s in hyper sleep too? Just like we were?” Lena asked “yes” Sandra added “this particular Blood Drifter has been my personal project since I was employed by Lettium” “and you’ve done such a great job, I would hate for your study’s to be cut short” a voice said from behind them.

They were surrounded, Curtis brought back up. He was joined by Dayna, Logan, and Dave and to everyone’s surprise Jessica Burns was with them. Sawyer was whimpering away behind a couple of guards, it was clear he had told them where we went. Apparently Mitchell’s blast wasn’t strong enough to squash that cockroach. “LISTEN UP” yelled Curtis “either you come with us willingly or we kill you right here and now, simple as that” he stood waiting for us to start walking in his direction and join there band of murderous psycho’s.

Lena was suddenly blessed with an amazing idea, she knew it would be a risk but anything was better then spending the rest of their lives as a living science room sample. She turned and grabbed a large metal steak that was lying on the ground as if it was begging to be used. She tossed it as hard as she could at the glass tank that was holding the extremely large Critter, smashing it open with one hit. The water swept them away, smashing their bodies against the wall. The creature hit the ground and carried away with the water tearing its cords away from it’s body. A few lingering moments of silence sat in the large, now soaking wet room. The creatures eye began to open “SHOOT IT” yelled Curtis “that would be a mistake” whispered Sandra as a few shots were fired into it’s tough reptile like skin and if anything, this just awakened it more, and this thing was pissed.

It tore away, person by person at the large group of guards. Curtis was thrown across the room smashing his head against a metal railing. Dayna ran at Lena who was trying to help Ashley up from the ground. She tackled her to the ground wrapping her hands around her neck. Lena was beginning to loose color in her face and her lips were turning a dark ‘fresh blood’ color. Ashley then picked up a large piece of glass from the floor that was conveniently provided to her by the broken tank. Ashley gripped the edges firmly with two hands, she knew this was going to hurt and at this moment she could only dream of having Rachel’s powers. She wasted no time, jabbing the shard of jagged glass into the back of Dayna’s neck. Her grip was immediately released from Lena’s neck as she fell to the floor, the water around her was mixed with, there was that color again, ‘fresh blood’.

Jordan could see that Sawyer was hiding underneath a couple of the dead guards, Jordan had no sympathy “don’t start fights you can’t finish” he always said. Jordan raced over to Sawyer throwing the bodies across the room; he picked him up by the caller of his shirt and shot out his fangs “PLEASE DON’T EAT ME!” Sawyer yelled “I’m full” replied Jordan as he tossed Sawyer in the Critter’s path of distraction. He lasted not 3 seconds before he was torn into pieces by the creature’s sharp claws.

Logan felt as if he needed to protect Curtis, that’s why he stopped Mitchell as he attempted to go finish Curtis off. Logan pointed his pistol at the back of Mitchell’s head and fired, but the bullet froze in mid air and Mitchell turned to greet who was on the other end of the trigger “ahh brother” he whispered “oh wait, that was all a lie. I have no idea who you are” Mitchell was keeping Logan’s body completely still using his abilities “I can’t even look at you anymore” Mitchell began slowly turning his hand, and the bullet was turning it’s direction of travel “I should have left you in Faetasia” he whispered as he let go of his hold on the bullet, it flew directly through Logan’s skull.

Mitchell then turned to continue his pursuit toward an injured Curtis, but I guess Curtis had the same idea as he was standing directly behind him when he turned around. Curtis lunged at Mitchell with a large knife “I CALL THE SHOTS HERE!” Curtis yelled as he tackled him to the ground. Curtis had a jump-start, Mitchell wasn’t ready and the knife went into his shoulder. He let out a loud deep scream when he yanked it out. Mitchell was weak, his powers were hard to grasp “I’m gunna kill you, and then I’m gunna kill your friends and then I’m gunna kill her, and I’ll make it slow and painful, just like I did in Bon Temps” Curtis snarled at Mitchell “YOU LIKE SLOW AND PAINFUL?” Rachel screamed from behind them as she jabbed a large metal stake through Curtis’ chest. Curtis looked down at the pole sticking from his body “but……but I own you” he choked “not anymore” Rachel said as she kicked the stake in deeper “lights out” she added as he hit the floor, face first, dead.